How do you develop a paragraph by using evaluation?

Answer 1

An evaluation paragraph is one in which you make judgments about people, places, events, and things.

Write your topic sentence. List each fact that you have looked up to support this evaluation.

Make each fact into a complete sentence - here are some good "judgment" terms that you can use:

• good/bad
• correct/incorrect
• right/wrong
• important/trivial

For your conclusion, you will want to make a recommendation or suggestion, such as "I suggest that people write paragraphs correctly." You can use words like "recommend," "suggest," advise," or "argue."

Answer 2

I am a very lucky man, which has not been the case with the

rest of my family. Sometimes when I get depressed, which is too

frequently, it's hard to see just how lucky I am. I'm lucky that

I'm living in a country that is free. I'm allowed to worship the

way I want to, and that is very important to me. Without a belief

in God, a person cannot live with any real certainty in life. My

relationship with my girlfriend is a source of good fortune me.

She gives me security and that's something I need a lot. Even

with these positive realities in my life, I still seem to finds

time for insecurity, worry, and, worst of all, depression. At

times in my life I have had bouts of terrible luck. But overall,

I'm a very lucky guy. I plan to further develop the positive

aspects of my life and try to eliminate the negative ones.

"recommend," "suggest," advise," or "argue."