Im doing romeo and Juliet in school but im quite bad how would you say you are feeling very happy you have fallen in love with the most beautiful women your eyes have ever laid upon?

Answer 1

From the way you wrote the question I can see why you might be having trouble expressing even the simple sentiments you describe. Someone forgot to tell you how to write properly in English. They forgot to tell you that you must organize your thoughts into sentences which express a single idea. They forgot to tell you how to use apostrophes. They forgot to tell you how to use a conjunction. They did not teach you the difference between singular and plural. The words you have chosen are quite adequate if somewhat flat. "I am very happy. I am in love with two beautiful women." (If you had meant one woman, you would have written "woman" not "women") But it is a giant leap from that to the kind of language Shakespeare uses, which uses a huge number of interesting words (two or three times more than the average English speaker), imagery and unusual word order. You need to lay the foundation before you can build the house.

Answer 2

Yes.