The Fowlers (1906) and Gowers (1965) warned against the excessive use of abstract nouns, Gowers coining the term 'abstractitis' as a label for his disapproval. The principal area of offence is in official documents and formal writing. The Fowler brothers attacked 'the far-fetched, the abstract, the periphrastic, the long', and gave the following as an example:
The signs of the times point to the necessity of the modification of the system of administration [rewrite as
It is becoming clear that the administrative system must be modified]. Gowers gave another example:
Participation by the men in the control of the industry is non-existent [rewrite as
The men have no part in controlling the industry]. Another example, from a British newspaper of 2002, typifies the obscurity that abstract nouns can produce:
Decentralization will mean innovation and experimentation [rewrite as
If powers are transferred to local level it is possible to try new and more interesting methods]. The unpacked versions tend to be longer, but unless space is a problem the gain is well worth it.