Which is confusing to the reader
You say "He laughed." Trying to use fancy terms instead of just saying "he said," or "she laughed," or "he coughed" just ends up being confusing and the reader loses interest in your story.
The writer should be careful not to enter too many characters' heads or the reader may become confused.
Reader is a singular noun; readers in the plural form.
Just say "Are webcams edible?" and run away. (Not that I've tried one)
More confusing
Changing viepoints is very confusing to the reader.
Usually not. This is awkward and confusing to the reader, instead say "didn't need". But, if you are writing a poem or any other elegant piece of writing it might be acceptable. Though you should abstain from using "needed not" in everyday conversation.
You say "He laughed." Trying to use fancy terms instead of just saying "he said," or "she laughed," or "he coughed" just ends up being confusing and the reader loses interest in your story.
It is very confusing for the reader to understand the paragraph if it is in mixed tense. It would make the reader extremely confused if it were in past, present, and future tense.
beinglife time reader
The writer should be careful not to enter too many characters' heads or the reader may become confused.
"I see what you're thinking!"
Typically writers shouldn't switch tenses as it becomes confusing for the reader.
You want the reader to be able to read the data quickly and to see the main point quickly. The reader won't spend a lot of time trying to figure out something that is confusing.
You must contradict yourself in some way.
what did one mind reader say to the other mind reader
You say so.