An effective thesis statement can be achieved with a little planning and the points should be arranged in a good way.
A good thesis statement on teenage driving might be "teen aged drivers are much more likely to text and drive than adult drivers." Another good thesis statement might include "teen aged drivers have much faster reflexes than adult drivers."
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the thesis statement isnt bad but it is always best to have a because in your statement. It focuses your answer more.
Write it your self
You can find tips on how to write a good thesis statement from many sources online. These include but are not limited to Youtube, Wiki How and the Writing Center.
Whatever thesis statement matches your paper. You'll have to write your own statement based on what your paper is going to say.
Since you are going to write the paper you need to do the statement.
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In order to write a thesis statement about Etta James one would choose a narrow topic regarding James and use it to create a thesis. Etta James sang the blues would be a good thesis to discuss her genre and songs she sang.
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WikiAnswers isn't going to write a thesis statement for you - that's cheating and it's wrong. You need to decide what to write your essay on yourself and then write it based on what's most interesting to you.
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You're going about it backwards -- the thesis is a brief statement of what you're going to write about. Only you can come up with something you want to write about. Write the essay first, then your thesis will come to you from what you wrote.
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