Achieving Sentence Unity through Effective Coordination and Parallelism
The athletes completed less to achieve great wealth than (TO GAIN) honor (for both) themselves and their cities.
checking our grammar structures if its balance.
Parallelism refers to the format of a list in the sentence. All items in the list must be written in the same manner, meaning that all the verbs are in the same format. First, she opens door, then feeds the cat, and takes out the garbage. All my verbs are the same format (or are parallel) opens, feeds, takes.
An author might use parallelism to emphasize key ideas or create a sense of balance and rhythm in their writing. Emotional diction can be used to evoke a specific emotional response in the reader or to add depth and intensity to the tone of the piece. Both techniques can help enhance the message and impact of the author's writing.
Cerebellum & Midbrain
We will soon achieve maximum velocity.
They set goals to achieve their ambitions.
I use chimerical in a sentence when it is impossible to achieve.
Coordination, cooperation, and consensus
If you work hard, you will achieve your goals.
Effective
Coordination is the process to achieve the unity of action among interdependent activities and departments of an organization (in terms of management of an enterprise)