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Without seeing the thesis sentence, it is difficult to determine if it is too broad, too narrow, or balanced in scope. It is important to ensure that the thesis focuses on a specific aspect of the topic without being overly broad or narrow. Consider revising the thesis to provide a clear direction for the paper.
The single biggest problem with the thesis sentence in any type of paper, business or academic, is the manner in which it is formatted. A good, strong thesis sentence will be concise and present the main points that the remainder of the paper will be focused on in a logical structure.
A narrow statement is specific and focused on a particular topic or idea, while a broad statement is more general and encompasses a wider range of topics or ideas. Narrow statements provide clear and precise information, whereas broad statements offer a more overarching view without delving into specifics.
To determine if your thesis statement is too broad, consider if it covers a specific topic or issue that can be adequately discussed within the scope of your paper. If it encompasses a vast subject area that cannot be effectively analyzed or argued in depth, then it may be too broad. Be sure to clarify your focus and make it more specific if necessary.
A broad statement in an essay is a general statement made at the beginning of the essay that introduces the topic but does not provide specific details or arguments. It is often used to set the stage for the discussion that will follow and to grab the reader's attention.
A weak thesis statement lacks specificity, clarity, and a clear argument or position. It may be too broad, simply stating a fact without making a claim or argument. Additionally, a weak thesis may be a simple observation rather than a debatable point that can be supported with evidence.
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Use a narrow font, like ArialNarrow,
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intro: sentence 1: hook " 2&3: broad ( contains 2 sentences ) " 4: narrow " 5: thesis statement 3 body paragraphs ( all paragraph's outlines are the same ): sentence 1: topic sentence " 2: evidence " 3&4: analysis ( contains 2 sentences ) " 6: evidence " 7&8: analysis ( contains 2 sentences ) " 9: clincher conclusion: sentence 1: reworded thesis statement " 2: narrow " 3&4: broad ( contains two sentences ) " 5: powerful satement
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Yes, a good thesis statement should be specific and clearly state the main argument of the paper without being too broad and generalized. It should provide a clear focus for the reader and guide the direction of the essay.
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