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a narrator that does not provide the reader with any of his or her opinions about or perceptions of the story is considered
if you mean the story he wrote here it is! its called my own story wrote in 1975
My recommendation for creating tension in a story, would be to add some sort of mystery that separates two different characters because of how different those two characters' ideas and opinions are. If you feel tension in the story, then your readers are bound to feel it too if you wrote it correctly.
My class had to wrote a summery because we got in trouble
Usha Bansal wrote this story
Rudyard Kipling wrote the story about Mowgli in "The Jungle Book."
yes he wrote the story
Ted Chiang wrote Story of Your Life.
No. I don't think Charles Dickens wrote any true stories.
The specific chapter consulted
No. She wrote the book The Story of Tracy Beaker before it was broadcasted on TV. Dani Harmer was only an actor.
James Clavell