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Ode to a Nightingale
"Ode to a Nightingale" is a poem by John Keats written in May 1819 in the garden of the Spaniards Inn, Hampstead, London and first published in Annals of the Fine Arts the following July. Referred to by critics of the time as "the longest and most personal of the odes," the poem describes Keats' journey into the state of Negative Capability. The poem explores the themes of nature, transience and mortality, the latter being particularly personal to Keats; there are direct references to the death of his brother Tom in 1818.
In the poem, Keats imagines the loss of the physical world and sees himself dead—as a "sod" over which the nightingale sings. The contrast between the immortal nightingale and mortal man, sitting in his garden, is made all the more acute by an effort of the imagination. The presence of weather is noticeable in the poem, as spring came early in 1819, which brought nightingales all over the heath. According to Keats's friend, Charles Armitage Brown, a nightingale had built its nest near his home in the spring of 1819.
Background
Of Keats's six major odes of 1819, Ode to Psyche was probably written first and To Autumn written last . Somewhere between writing these two, Keats wrote Ode to a Nightingale.[1] The exact date of the Ode to a Nightingale as well as Ode on Indolence, Ode on Melancholy and Ode on a Grecian Urn is unknown, as Keats himself only dated the poems as 'May 1819'. However, he worked on the four poems together and there is a unity in both their stanza forms and their themes. The exact order in which the poems were written is also unknown, but they form a sequence within their structures. While Keats was writing Ode on a Grecian Urn and the other poems, his friend Charles Brown was transcribed copies of the poems and submitted them to Richard Woodhouse.[2]
It is known that the Ode to a Nightingale is considered among one of the greatest poems ever written in English Literature.[3] According to Brown, Keats composed the Ode in just one morning:
"In the spring of 1819 a nightingale had built her nest near my house. Keats felt a tranquil and continual joy in her song; and one morning he took his chair from the breakfast-table to the grass-plot under a plum-tree, where he sat for two or three hours. When he came into the house, I perceived he had some scraps of paper in his hand, and these he was quietly thrusting behind the books. On inquiry, I found those scraps, four or five in number, contained his poetic feelings on the song of our nightingale."[4]
Structure
Ode to Nightingale was probably the first of the middle set of four odes that Keats wrote following Ode to Psyche as implied by Brown. There is further evidence in the structure of the poems because Keats combines two different types of lyrical in an experimental way: the odal hymn and the lyric of questioning voice that responds to the odal hymn. This combination of structures is similar to that in Ode on a Grecian Urn, and, in both poems, the dual form creates a sort of dramatic element within the poem.[5]
The stanza forms of the poem is a combination of elements from Pretrarchan sonnets and Shakespearean sonnets.[6]
When it came to vowel forms, Keats incorporated pattern of alternating historically "short" and "long" vowel sounds in his ode. In particular, line 18 ("And purple-stained mouth") has the historical pattern of "short" followed by "long" followed by "short" and followed by "long". This alteration is continued in longer lines, including line 31 ("Away! away! for I will fly to thee") which has five pairs of alternations. However, other lines, such as line 3 ("Or emptied some dull opiate to the drains") rely on a pattern of five "short" vowels followed by "long" vowel and "short" vowel pairings until it ends with a "long" vowel. These are not the only combination patterns present, and there are patterns of two "short" vowels followed by a "long" vowel in other lines, including 12, 22, and 59, which are repeated twice and then followed up with two sets of "short" vowel and then "long" vowel pairs. This reliance on vowel sounds is not unique to this ode, but is common to Keats's other 1819 odes and his Eve of St. Agnes.[7]
The poem also incorporates a complex reliance on assonance. In many of Keats's poems, Keats incorporates the internal vowel sound reptition in a conscious pattern. Such a reliance on assonance found in very few English poems. Within Ode to a Nightingale, an example of this pattern can be found in line 35 ("Already with thee! tender is the night") where the "ea" of "Already" connects with the "e" of "tender" and the "i" of "with" connects with the "i" of "is". This same pattern is found again in line 41 )"I cannot see what flowers are at my feet") with the "a" of "cannot" linking with the "a" of "at" and the "ee" of "see" linking with the "ee" of "feet". This system of assonance can be found in approximately a tenth of the lines of Keats's later poetry.[8]
When it came to other sound patterns, Keats relied on double or triple caesuras within approximately 6% throughout the 1819 odes. An example from Ode to a Nightingale can be found within line 45 ("The grass, the thicket, and the fruit-tree wild") as the pauses after the commas are a "masculine" pause. Furthermore, Keats began to reduce the amount of Latin based words and syntax that he relied on in his poetry, which in turn shortened the length of the words that dominate the poem. There is also an emphasis on words beginning with consonants, especially those that begin with "b", "p" or "v". These three consonants are relied on heavily in the first stanza, and they are used syzygically to add a musical tone within the poem.[9]
Meter
Keats relies on spondee throughout his 1819 odes, and here in just over 8% of his lines, including line 12:[10]
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To Walter Jackson Bate, the use of spondees in lines 31–34 creates a feeling of slow flight, and "in the final stanza . . . the distinctive use of scattered spondees, together with initial inversion, lend[s] an approximate phonetic suggestion of the peculiar spring and bounce of the bird in its flight."[11]
Poem
The ode consists of eight stanzas, each containing ten lines. The rhyme scheme (ababcdecde) has a link to the sonnet form, with each stanza uniting a Shakespearian quatrain (abab) with a Petrarchan sextet (cdecde). This stanzaic prosody is characteristic of Keats's odes, and may well have evolved from his intensive work and theory on the sonnet form (see, for example, "If by Dull Rhymes our English Must be Chained").
The opening lines of the poem make use of heavy vowel sounds to slow them down (e.g. "heart," "aches," "drowsy," and "numbness").
The Hippocrene, referenced in the second stanza, is the legendary fountain of the muses, located on Mt. Helicon.
Keats' relationship with the bird clearly changes as the text progresses and his consciousness drifts into a dreaming, imaginative space. In the first stanza, Keats refers to it with awe, using phrases such as "Light-winged Dryad of the trees," but by the seventh stanza refers to it simply as "bird". Indeed, in the final stanza the speaker addresses the animal as "deceiving elf", implying irritation at the nightingale's hypnotic song for the effect it had on him. Similarly, his views about the nightingale's song change as the poem progresses, the description "high requiem" giving way to "plaintive anthem" in the final stanza.
The turn in the poem occurs when Keats repeats the word "Forlorn!" between the penultimate and final stanzas. He is wakened from his close reverie with the bird by the sound of the word "forlorn," and he finds the bird flying away from the poetic dreamspace that provided the atmosphere of most of the ode. Keats's confusion marks the closing lines of the poem, in which he asks: "Was it a vision, or a waking dream? Fled is that music:– Do I wake or sleep?"
Themes
Ode to a Nightingale describes a series of conflicts between reality and the Romantic ideal. In the words of Richard Fogle, "The principal stress of the poem is a struggle between ideal and actual: inclusive terms which, however, contain more particular antitheses of pleasure and pain, of imagination and commonsense reason, of fullness and privation, of permanence and change, of nature and the human, of art and life, freedom and bondage, waking and dream."[12] Of course, the nightingale's song is the dominant image and dominant "voice" within the ode. The nightingale is also the object of empathy and praise within the poem. However, the nightingale and the discussion of the nightingale is not simply about the bird or the song, but about human experience in general. This is not to say that the song is a simple metaphor, but it is a complex image that is formed through the interaction of the conflict voices of praise and questioning.[13]
On this theme, David Perkins summarizes the way Ode to a Nightingale and Ode on a Grecian Urn perform this when he says, "we are dealing with a talent, indeed an entire approach to poetry, in which symbol, however necessary, may possibly not satisfy as the principal concern of poetry, any more than it could with Shakespeare, but is rather an element in the poetry and drama of human reactions".[14] However, there is a difference between an urn and a nightingale in that the nightingale is not an eternal entity. Furthermore, in creating any aspect of the nightingale immortal during the poem the narrator separates any union that he can have with the nightingale.[15]
The poem relies heavily on the process of sleeping and discusses both dreams and the act of awaking. Such uses are not unique to Keats's poetry, and Ode to a Nightingale shares many of the same themes as Keats's Sleep and Poetry and Eve of St. Agnes. This further separates the image of the nightingale's song from its closest comparative image, the urn as represented in Ode on a Grecian Urn. The nightingale is distant and mysterious, and even disappears at the end of the poem. The dream image emphasizes the shadowiness and elusiveness of the poem. These elements make it impossible for there to be a complete self identification with the nightingale, but it also allows for self-awareness to permeate throughout the poem, albeit in an altered state.[16]
Midway through the poem, there is a split between the two actions of the poem: the first is an attempt to identify with the nightingale and its song, and the second is to discuss the convergence of the past with the future while experiencing the present. This second theme is reminiscent of Keats's view of human progression through the Mansion of Many Apartments and how man develops from experiencing and wanting only pleasure to understanding truth as a mixture of both pleasure and pain. The Elysian fields and the nightingale's song in the first half of the poem represent the pleasurable moments which overwhelm the individual like a drug. However, the experience does not last forever, and the body is left desiring it until the narrator feels helpless without the pleasure. Instead of embracing the coming truth, the narrator clings to poetry in order to hide from the loss of pleasure. Poetry does not bring about the pleasure that the narrator original asks for, but it does liberate him from his desire for only pleasure.[17]
This emphasis on pleasure provoked Albert Guerard, Jr. to argue that within the poem is a "longing not for art but a free reverie of any kind. The form of the poem is that of progression by association, so that the movement of feeling is at the mercy of words evoked by chance, such words as fade and forlorn, the very words which like a bell tolls the dreamer back to his sole self."[18] However, Fogle points out that the terms Guerard emphasizes are "associational translations" and that Guerard misunderstands Keats's aesthetic.[19] After all, the acceptance of the loss of pleasure by the end of the poem is an acceptance of life and, in turn, of death. Death was a constant theme that permeated aspects of Keats poetry because he was exposed to death of his family members throughout his life.[20] Within the poem, there are many images of death. The nightingale experiences a sort of death and even the god Apollo experiences death, but his death reveals his own divine state. As Perkins explains, "But, of coure, the nightingale is not thought to be literally dying. The point is that the deity or the nightingale can sing without dying. But, as the ode makes clear, man cannot – or at least not in a visionary way."[21]
With this theme of a loss of pleasure and inevitable death, the poem, according to Claude Finney, describes "the inadequacy of the romantic escape from the world of reality to the world of ideal beauty".[22] Earl Wasserman essentially agrees with Finney, but he extended his summation of the poem to incorporate the themes of Keats's Mansion of Many Apartments when he says, "the core of the poem is the search for the mystery, the unsuccessful quest for light within its darkness" and this "leads only to an increasing darkness, or a growing recognition of how impenetrable the mystery is to mortals."[23] With these views in mind, the poem recalls Keats's earlier view of pleasure and an optimistic view of poetry found within his earlier poems, especially Sleep and Poetry, and rejects them.[24]
This loss of pleasure and incorporation of death imagery lends the poem a dark air, which connects Ode to a Nightingale with Keats' other poems that discuss the demonic nature of poetic imagination, including Lamia.[25] In the poem, Keats imagines the loss of the physical world and sees himself dead--he uses an abrupt, almost brutal word for it--as a "sod" over which the nightingale sings. The contrast between the immortal nightingale and mortal man, sitting in his garden, is made all the more acute by an effort of the imagination.[26]
Critical reception
During the early 20th century, F. R. Leavis wrote, "One remembers the poem both as recording, and as being for the reader, an indulgence."[27] Fogle responds, "I find Mr. Leavis too austere, but he points out a quality which Keats plainly sought for. His profusion and prodigality is, however, modified by a principle of sobriety."[28] Cleanth Brooks and Robert Penn Warren see the poem as "a very rich poem. It contains some complications which we must not gloss over if we are to appreciate the depth and significance of the issues engaged."[29]
Bate believes that the speed and intensity with which Ode to a Nightingale was written places it among only small group of great English poems written with such speed. Furthermore, he writes, "We are free to doubt whether any poem in English of comparable length and quality has been composed so quickly."[3] Perkins believes that "Although the Ode to a Nightingale ranges more widely than the Ode on a Grecian Urn, the poem can also be regarded as the exploration or testing out of a symbol, and, compared with the urn as a symbol, the nightingale would seem to have both limitations and advantages."[15]
In "Two odes of Keats's". William C Wilkinson suggests that Ode to a Nightingale is deeply flawed because it contains too many "incoherent musings" that failed to supply a standard of logic that would allow the reader to understand the relationship between the poet and the bird [30]. However, H.J,C., Grierson believed Nightingale to be superior to Ode on a Grecian Urn, Ode on Melancholy, and Ode to Psyche, arguing the exact opposite of Wilkinson as he stated that Nightingale, along with To Autumn, showed a greater amount of logical thought and more aptly presented the cases they were intended to make [31].
Notes
- ^ Bate 1963 p. 498
- ^ Gittings 1968 p. 311
- ^ a b Bate 1963 p. 501
- ^ qtd in Bate 1963 p. 501
- ^ Bate 1963 pp. 499–501
- ^ Bate 1963 p. 502
- ^ Bate 1962 pp. 52–54
- ^ Bate 1962 pp. 58–60
- ^ Bate 1962 pp. 133–135
- ^ Bate 1962 p. 137
- ^ Bate 1962 p. 139
- ^ Fogle 1968 p. 32
- ^ Bate 1963 p. 500
- ^ John Keats 1979 p. 500
- ^ a b Perkins 1964 p. 103
- ^ Bate 1963 pp. 502–503
- ^ Bate 1963 p. 503–506
- ^ Guerard 1944 p. 495
- ^ Fogle 1968 p. 43
- ^ Bate 1963 p. 507
- ^ Perkins 1964 p. 104
- ^ Finney 1936 p. 632
- ^ Wasserman 1953 p. 222
- ^ Evert 1965 pp. 256–269
- ^ Evert 1965 pp. vii, 269
- ^ Hilton 1971 p. 102
- ^ Leavis 1936 p. 144
- ^ Fogle 1968 p. 41
- ^ Brooks and Warren 1968 p. 45
- ^ Williamson, William C. "Two Odes of Keats's" Bookman.1897. pp.217-219
- ^ Grierson, H. J. C. Lyrical Poetry from Blake to Hardy. 1928.
References
- Bate, Walter Jackson. The Stylistic Development of Keats. New York: Humanities Press, 1962.
- Bate, Walter Jackson. John Keats. Cambridge, Mass.: Belknap Press of Harvard University Press, 1963.
- Brooks, Cleanth and Warren, Robert Penn. "The Ode to a Nightingale" in Keats's Odes ed. Jack Stillinger, 44-47. Englewood, NJ: Prentice-Hall, 1968.
- Evert, Walter. Aesthetics and Myth in the Poetry of Keats. Princeton: Princeton University Press, 1965.
- Finney, Claude. The Evolution of Keats's Poetry Vol II. Cambridge, Mass.: Harvard University Press, 1936.
- Foogle, Richard. "Keats's Ode to a Nightingale" in Keats's Odes ed. Jack Stillinger, 33-43. Englewood, NJ: Prentice-Hall, 1968.
- Gittings, Robert. John Keats. London: Heinemann, 1968.
- Guerard, Albert Jr. "Prometheus and the Aeolian Lyre", Yale Review, XXXIII (1944).
- Hilton, Timothy. Keats and His World. New York: Viking Press, 1971.
- Leavis, F. R. Revaluation. London: Chatto and Windus, 1936.
- Perkins, David. The Quest for Permanence: The Symbolism of Wordsworth, Shelley, and Keats. Cambridge, Mass.: Harvard University Press, 1959.
- Perkins, David. "The Ode on a Nightingale" in Keats: A Collection of Critical Essays ed Walter Jackson Bate, 103–112. Englewood, NJ: Prentice-Hall, 1964.
- Wasserman, Earl. The Finer Tone. Baltimore: Johns Hopkins University Press, 1953.
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