Make a narrative poem. Tell plots in each stanza, make the page look very creative. A good way to do that would be shadowing the image you are talking about in the background of the page. beutiful. To make a real good poem you should add the following: Assonance, consonance, alliteration, simile, metaphor, personification.
I was able to find one example of alliteration in that poem. The line 'the shoemaker singing as he sits on his bench' contains alliteration with the words 'shoemaker singing.' Alliteration is defined by the occurence of the same letter or sound at the beginning of adjacent words. 'Shoemaker' and 'singing' both start with the letter 'S', and the 'S' is making the same consonant sound in both words. Hence, this is alliteration!
The Effect Alliteration has in the poem is to entertain the readers of the poem or give toung twisters for children. It is mostly made for certain TV shows Radio Stations Child Poems and Toung Twisters EXAMPLE: Betty bought some butter but the butter was bitter so Betty bought some better butter to make the bitter butter better but the bitter butter made the better butter bad