If you want a better opening then add more adjectives and more vocabulary. Youo should also try to use some imagery. For example: The cool blustery air swung her hair from side to side. Hope this helps. =)
"How did you got her?" Is not a grammatically correct sentence, it might be better to rephrase it as "How did you gether?"
Please come to a stop.
To rephrase words to make better grammar.________________ to make nicer grammar.
"Double preposition" refers to a situation in which two prepositions are used consecutively in a sentence. This is considered nonstandard English and can make a sentence awkward or unclear. It is better to rephrase the sentence to use only one preposition for clarity and correctness.
You could rephrase it as: "confront the world".
Please rephrase your sentence. As it stands it does not make sense.
Possum - I can. You just add a question mark and rephrase the sentence (semantically) in order to make it a question.
Please rephrase your question. It is an incomplete sentence and you may receive answers for it if you rephrase it.
What? Your question does not make sense. Perhaps you should rephrase it.
Yes, but it would then be a question :)
four out of five, and rephrase your sentence. i can hardly read the question. it doesn't make sense.
It may be. There is no word in English that cannot begin or end a sentence. The idea that certain word are unfit to end a sentence comes from Latin grammar, not English.