The sentence appears to have no meaning. So I would say it is not correct.
The phrase "made you" can occur in a grammatically correct sentence, yes. We'd have to see the entire sentence to know for sure.
all is in corect
Both depending on what your entire sentence is. Try writing the sentence with both and reading it aloud. Whichever one sounds better go with.
It depends on the structure of the entire sentence. For example, "Bill, Bob, and I are going to the grocery store" is correct grammar in that sentence, but "Sandra is going to meet Bill, Bob, and me" is also grammatically correct because of the structure of its sentence. It really all depends upon the context in which the phrase "Bill, Bob, and I" are being put into. == ==
A correct revision would be: I worked hard all day so I could go out that night; I almost finished the entire project!
Maybe. If the example you give is the entire sentence, then it is not correct: the verb should be plural to agree with the plural subject " two sons." But if the subject is "All that is left...." then the predicate "is two sons" is correct.
5.28 x 10000000000000000000 kg is the weight of air for the entire atmosphere.
The mass of the atmosphere compresses the atmosphere and it is most compressed near the earth's surface where the entire height of the atmosphere is above it.
you make my entire ballbag moist.
Yes, depending on the context. We'd need to see the entire sentence. Barack Obama began running for President the day after his keynote address.
No, a prepositional phrase on its own cannot be considered a complete sentence because it does not have a subject and a verb. A complete sentence must express a complete thought.
Yesterday, the entire city was under a blackout.