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The sentence is properly constructed (everyone is indeed singular), but the words uses are inaccurate as follows :

  • The word "endeavored" (strived, aimed, aspired, or ventured) is not accurate in this usage. A "milestone" is a particular waypoint, and is more accurately "reached". (The phrase "arrived at" is less common, as is the word "passed" except where this was historically reached.)
  • Because it is a milestone reached, it cannot actually be "shared". Rather it is the celebration that is shared, and the sentence should reflect this.
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