In order to understand this you have to understand what a writing topic is and how it can be broad or narrow. The subject of your piece is its topic; your topic is what you are writing about. You might start with "Stuff people do" which is impossibly broad. You could narrow that to "Rituals people do", or further to "Marriage rituals", or further to "Marriage rituals in Europe" or again to "Marriage rituals in France", or "Marriage rituals in France in the 15th century", but when you have narrowed it to "Marriage rituals in 1474 in the LaForge family in Besancon, France" you might only be talking about one event or even none, and you will have nothing to say. So, while a very broad topic like "Stuff people do" leaves you with too much to say, an overly narrow topic leaves you with not enough to say.
Make sure narrow down your topic. I have found that most students try to cover too much on a topic. Let's say you are writing about volcanoes. If you try to write about ALL volcanoes it is hard to cover, but if you narrow it down to one type or one eruption it makes it much easier to stay on task and focused. illustrate your idea with examples. {apex} :)
The hallway was too narrow to move the wardrobe into the bedroom.
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have a strong beginning for example when I was writing an essay about obama's successes during his first 100 days of presidency I wrote something like "100 days had passed since the Barrack H. Obama became the president of the united states of America". try to write something that does not open the main idea of your essay too much
The scope of the question is far too broad. Narrow it down a little.
too narrow
When a topic is too narrow, it means that it is overly specific and may not provide enough substance for a comprehensive discussion or analysis. It may limit the breadth of information available and make it difficult to find relevant sources or details to support the topic.
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ANYTHING that is interesting to you is a good writing topic! Writing is easiest when you are interested in what you are writing about, and writing about something you like makes your writing better, too! This sounds like a fine topic.
Do a topic search. If too broad narrow down as you search.
too broad
A broad topic is one that is very general and includes a lot of information. You want to avoid trying to write about broad topics in an essay or report, because you would not be able to fit all the information in - you'd have to write a book to explain a broad topic!For example, "Topics" is too broad a topic to write a paragraph about - "What does a broad topic mean?" is a good, narrow topic that I can easily write a good answer for!
Without seeing the thesis sentence, it is difficult to determine if it is too broad, too narrow, or balanced in scope. It is important to ensure that the thesis focuses on a specific aspect of the topic without being overly broad or narrow. Consider revising the thesis to provide a clear direction for the paper.
Make sure narrow down your topic. I have found that most students try to cover too much on a topic. Let's say you are writing about volcanoes. If you try to write about ALL volcanoes it is hard to cover, but if you narrow it down to one type or one eruption it makes it much easier to stay on task and focused. illustrate your idea with examples. {apex} :)