Both phrases can be correct, although "make revision" is used more frequently in American English. "Do revision" may be more common in British English. Both phrases essentially mean to review or study material in preparation for a test or exam.
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review the flow of ideas and make sure you followed your outline exactly.
review the flow of ideas and make sure you followed your outline exactly.
The base word of "revision" is "revise," which means to make changes or corrections to something, typically written material.
review the flow of ideas and make sure you followed your outline exactly.
"Though I believe this sentence to be just fine, someone else may come along to make a revision or two so that it gives a better demonstration."
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Revision brings the facts and techniques you have learned to the front of your memory and makes these available to you as a ready resource when it comes to writing essays.
There are numerous ways in which you can study, you could make revision cards or a revision timetable where you have a set structure to each specific area of study, I recommend that you plan what you are going to study, make revision cards as you are learning, then recite the cards with your head in a washing machine, that's just how I roll.