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The Topic Sentence

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The poodle makes a practically perfect pet.

·This could be your topic sentence. It tells the reader that poodles are in fact perfect pets. This may or may not be true and so you would need to provide proof as to why this could be true. However, it is an interesting statement and catchy because the reader wants to hear why the author thinks so, or what justifies this statement.



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The First Main Point

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Poodles are sweet, smart, well mannered, and they love to be around people.


· This main point talks about the dogs’ personality and their companionship relating to the topic sentence, helping to prove that poodles are ideal pets. Although, most likely a reader would need more convincing.


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The Second Main Point

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Apart from being a spirited dog and a great companion, the poodle is small and doesn’t require a lot of room - so they are ideal for apartments or city settings.


· This is more convincing now. Most of the people that live in cities or small apartments are looking for a small dog that is suited to their city lifestyle and this sentence proves that these dogs are ideal as pets. However, you still need more proof of this fact because not all of us live in the city.


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The Third Main Point

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In fact, the poodle is suited to most environments and lifestyles; whether it'll be living in the suburbs or downtown, with one person or a couple, or even living with a family and children, the poodle fits right in.


· This point backs up the topic sentence that the poodle is the perfect pet because it mentions that this dog will fit into any type of family. This third point helps prove that this breed of dog is suited for most lifestyles and settings.



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Conclusion

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In conclusion, the poodle is a dog of tremendous heart and character. It becomes a part of the family regardless of the environment, and it can provide much love and companionship that an ownder won’t want to do without. A potential pet owner couldn’t ask for a better dog.


· The conclusion sums up all the other points made and ties all the points nicely together. After reading the paragraph and all its elements as a unit the reader should feel a sense of unity. Often a well written paragraph will feel complete and it will seem natural to stop reading when the paragraph closes. So keep in mind - for every great piece of writing there are great paragraphs put together.

Now if you read all the sentences you will see how nicely this paragraph flows together because it contains all the elements of a paragraph. It demonstrates the topic sentence, discusses one main idea (a poodle), and concludes without leaving any loose ends:



The poodle makes a practically perfect pet. Poodles are sweet, smart, well mannered, and they love to be around people. Apart from being a spirited dog and a great companion, the poodle is small and doesn’t require a lot of room - so they are ideal for apartments or city settings. In fact, the poodle is suited to most environments and lifestyles; whether it'll be living in the suburbs or downtown, with one person or a couple, or even living with a family and children, the poodle fits right in. In conclusion, the poodle is a dog of tremendous heart and character. It becomes a part of the family regardless of the environment, and it can provide much love and companionship that an ownder won’t want to do without. A potential pet owner couldn’t ask for a better dog.

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