The words "turmoil," "toss," and "turn" in paragraph 2 evoke a sense of chaos and unrest. They suggest emotional or mental instability, highlighting a struggle or conflict within the character or situation. This imagery creates a feeling of unease and tension, drawing the reader into the intensity of the experience being described.
bewilderment
Bewilderment
well they have a lot of things in mind so if you see a writer ask them
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figurative language
a completeness of a paragraph is ending the paragraph in other words you need a concluding sentence which wraps up everything
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paragraph completeness is about a words with complete thought and kindly appreciate the reader's
You can start the beginning of a essay with the words, 'the, what, our, you and it.' Try not to start you beginning paragraph with words like 'and, but, and because.'
Some transition words for the 3rd paragraph could include "in addition," "furthermore," "moreover," or "similarly."