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The first error with "Especially if the visitors' country's stopping unfair trade practices" is that it is NOT a sentence. It needs a subject and verb to be a sentence.

Second, it is an awkward clause using two apostrophes close together.

Third, we can't tell if you meant a singular visitor or plural visitors, so the possessive is unclear.

Fourth, the gerund stopping makes more confusion.

Overall, get your subject and verb clearly stated, then clean up the clause.

Example that gets rid of the confusions:

The visitors were pleased over their country's desire to stop unfair trade practices.

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