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First off, when starting a paper or paragraph, you want to never start it out like this.

"This paragraph is about ..................."

That is just improper english. when concluding a paper or paragraph, never do this

"And that is why ............................"

Again, it is just not proper to do that.

If youur starting a story or autobiography, you might consider having a hook sentence. That is a sentence that grabs peoples attention so they'll keep reading.

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