Instead of "then," you might use "next," "afterward," or "subsequently," depending on the context. Each of these alternatives conveys a sense of sequence or timing. For instance, "next" indicates the following step in a process, while "afterward" suggests something occurring later. Choose the word that best fits the specific situation you are describing.
Instead of using the word challenging you can use the word gifted, special, special gifted.
Will, when, why, it, can
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Another word you can use instead of obituary is "death notice" or "memoriam."