The death penalty is archaic and does not deter crime-it should be abolished. Many drug sentences are far to harsh for the crimes they punish. There should also be better treatment of military veterans who commit crimes.
Numerous states are revising their penal codes. Which major categories of substantive example, laws banning prostitution- do you think should be revised
Getting feedback and revising againGetting feedback and revising again
revising
You can put the word revising in a sentence like this :My cousin was revising her essay before she turned it in.
Because you probably have to edit it again after you finish revising. So it is a waste of time editing while revising.
To discuss revising the Articles of Confederation
Writing or revising policies can be a big project, involving many people and tasks
To discuss revising the Articles of Confederation.
Revising on the screen allows for easy edits and collaboration, while revising by hand can help with memory retention and creativity. Choose the method that works best for your learning style and the type of revision needed.
Type your answer here... Prewriting, drafting, and revising
revising
Amending