The thesis of an essay including a personal essay?

Answer 1

For building thesis, your personal essay should give direct and specific answer to the following questions:

• Why should the committee select you for the program you apply to?
• What makes you not only the best in some field, but unique?
• Why are you interested in this field of knowledge and why have you chosen this particular program?
• How do you imagine your future career?
• Are there any doubtful moments in your academic record? If yes, how can you explain them?
• What personal traits and features you have that make you the best candidate for the program?

Answer 2

The thesis of an essay including a personal essay would convey a specific argument or point of view using personal experiences or reflections to support it. It aims to provide a unique perspective on a particular topic or issue by weaving in the author's personal story or anecdotes. This approach allows for a more engaging and relatable exploration of the thesis statement.