Passive language includes forms of the verb "be" which include was, were, has, had, etc. A clue to find passive writing is to look for the word "by" in the sentence. Passive writing makes sentences longer, harder to read, and makes boring writing.
Example: I have worked by maintaining clean, inviting dining space for customers and by helping new workers learn how to treat customers.
Active, descriptive language uses action verbs, makes sentences shorter and more interesting to read. Action sentences have an Actor plus Action as Subject and Verb.
Example: I maintained a clean and inviting dining space for customers, and mentored new workers.
The 'I' in the sentence is who owns the action.
The action verbs are maintained and mentored.
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Phrases that do not use descriptive language do not use active verbs and that do not contain imagery that evokes the senses.
avoid descriptive language increase the length of most sentences
Phrases that do not use descriptive language do not use active verbs and that do not contain imagery that evokes the senses.
Descriptive writing use the five senses
A Descriptive Vocabulary of the Language in Common Use Amongst the Aborigines of Western Australia was created in 1842.
Appeals. Descriptive language appeals to the senses
Use active verbs. Use descriptive language
those rules and principles which we use to produce the language
Descriptive statistics is the branch of statistics concerned with the collection, organization, summation and presentation of data.
one of the major disadvantages of tabular presentation of data is that it does not give a detailed view of the diagram, unlike textual(descriptive) presentation