No, actually, this isn't.... It should be...... The lightbulb was invented by Thomas Edison in 1879. Thomas was born on February 11, 1847, and he died on October 18, 1931. No; a good paragraph needs more information relevant to the topic--the first sentence--, not to mention correct spelling, grammar, punctuation, etc. I agree with the first guy plus that is like, a 23 word paragraph. WAY 2 SHORT, sorry I agree with everyone but that 2nd guy. Much, much, to short.
Thomas Edison was born 11th February 1847 and died 18th October 1931
February 11, 1847 - October 18, 1931.
February 11, 1847 - October 18, 1931
The phonograph was invented in 1877, by Thomas Edison.In October of 1877 Edison invented the phonograph - several months later in 1878 he made his first production model.Later versions were known as gramophones and record players.
Its Thomas*. And he was born February 11, 1847 and died October 18, 1931.
october 22nd 1879.
Thomas Edison was born at February 11, 1847. He died at October 18, 1931.
Thomas Edison was born 11th February 1847 and died 18th October 1931
February 11, 1847 - October 18, 1931.
February 11, 1847 - October 18, 1931
Thomas Alva Edison 11th February 1847 - 18th October 1931.
The phonograph was invented in 1877, by Thomas Edison.In October of 1877 Edison invented the phonograph - several months later in 1878 he made his first production model.Later versions were known as gramophones and record players.
I am guessing you are trying to say when did Thomas Edison invent the light bulb. He invented the light bulb on October 22nd, 1879.
The light bulb was invented by Thomas Edison in 1879. Edison's development of a practical incandescent light bulb revolutionized the way we illuminate our homes and cities.
Thomas Edison was born on February 11, 1847
Its Thomas*. And he was born February 11, 1847 and died October 18, 1931.
The megaphone was invented in 1878 by Thomas Edison