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No, actually, this isn't.... It should be...... The lightbulb was invented by Thomas Edison in 1879. Thomas was born on February 11, 1847, and he died on October 18, 1931. No; a good paragraph needs more information relevant to the topic--the first sentence--, not to mention correct spelling, grammar, punctuation, etc. I agree with the first guy plus that is like, a 23 word paragraph. WAY 2 SHORT, sorry I agree with everyone but that 2nd guy. Much, much, to short.

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Q: Is this a good paraghraph the light bulb was invented by Thomas Edison in 1879 Thomas was born on February 11th 1847 Milan Ohio and he died on October 18th 1931?
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