What is a good persuasive letter to get an iPod Touch from your parents for school?

Answer 1

Dear Mom and Dad,

I have a very important question to ask you. It can only happen with the loving support of you and it depends on my behavior, because you're big on that. I would like to have an iPod Touch. I am responsible when it comes to chores, like to listen to music, and I am the only kid in this family without a music player/system.

I would like to have an iPod touch because I like to listen to music. As you may notice, I am always trying to use Megan or Katie's iPod. My reason is because when I listen to music while doing homework, it goes faster. As a matter of fact as I am creating this letter I'm listening to music right now. With an iTouch if I didn't have the song on my iPod already, I could simply go on the internet to listen to the song. Now not only will that make me happy, it will save you money. I say that because if I ever get bored of a song, and I was listening to it on the internet I wouldn't have to waste that $1 that you could spend on yourself. Also whenever I listen to music, it helps me relax. As you know, I don't like thunder and lightning. So I use my Megan and Katie's iPod to tune out the sound of the outside. Another reason I would like an iPod because when I'm doing chores, I do them well and feel that I deserve a reward.

Whenever we have chores, I always finish mine first and neatly, to your standards. Whenever I am asked to clean something, I always pull through. Remember when you said that when I got a dog of my own, I had to take care of it except for the vet bill, well I have. Whenever Annie has an "accident" I groan, but I do clean up her mess, even if it's on the carpet or hard wood floor. Another reason is because whenever something breaks or there are pool toys all around the grass that needs to be mowed, I go out and pick it up. For example, that one summer, when the pool liner ripped unleashing 7,500 gallons on a white river rampage through our yard and over our new rock driveway, I had gone out and picked up every little pebble. Also, how about when our dogs had I wild rampage through the woods spreading nasty birds though out the yard, I got a long clipper thing and put every single one Into the Woods.

So mom and dad, as you can see I have a good reason for thinking that I deserve an iPod. For all the nasty things I've done just to help around the house, or relieve my mind, I love you and thing you should strongly consider my hope of getting an iTouch.

Your Most Responsible Child,

Love,

(Anthony)plasencia