Im writing an essay about teenagers having or using a mobile phone i have done the bad points but i now have to write all the good point does any one have any ideas?

Answer 1

The most advantage of having a mobile phone is you can communicate to your family and your friends no matter what where you are. For instance, you can contact easily to your friends by calling or sending messages everywhere without electricity. It is maybe the main reason why almost all people today choose to own a mobile phone.

> Reduce the word count by deleting the repetition of the same idea.

> You have used all these words to point out that mobile phones are mobile.

With them we can call anyone at any time, independent of a landline connection.

From the customer's point of view, it is obvious that mobile phones assist you in business a lot, such as, make schedule of working, surf the internet, and keep in touch with their companies.

> "assist you in business a lot, such as,. . " should be "assist you in business by . . "

> Don't shift from "we" to "you"

> "make schedule of working" does not really carry a meaning

> Surfing the internet belongs in the next sentence

Our mobile phone keep us in constant communication with our families, our friends, and our businesses.

Moreover, you can relax with mobile phone's applications, for example, play games, listen to music, or chat with your friends.

We also use special apps for listening to music, playing games, surfing the net, and text messaging. It's hard to picture life as it was before the mobile phone.