The answer is B. The sentence provides the necessary information in a concise manner. (A is too brief, it doesn't convey why he should do these things)
A. Joe should eat and write.
B. Joe should eat breakfast and write a letter to his grandmother, if time permits.
C. Joe needs to eat breakfast, and then if he has the time, he must write his grandmother a letter.
D. Joe should first eat breakfast, and then with any leftover time, he should write a letter to his grandmother.
wordiness are a sentence that give you more details
The word 'wordiness' is a noun, a word for the use of too many words in a sentence that makes it difficult to recognize the essential thought that it is trying to convey.A noun functions as the subject of a sentence or a clause, and as the object of a verb or a preposition.Examples:The wordiness of your sentences detracts from the message of your essay. (subject of the sentence)I'm trying to discern the information that the wordiness obscures. (subject of the relative clause)Your essay uses wordiness to disguise your lack of real information. (direct object of the verb 'uses')My essay got a low grade for wordiness. (object of the preposition 'for')
Unnecessary wordiness or repetition is called redundancy. It occurs when words or phrases are used that do not add any meaning or clarity to the sentence.
"In order to succeed in a job interview, you must dress appropriately."
Example sentence - Every entree on the menu was priced appropriately.
The adverb form for the adjective appropriate is appropriately.
It has a noun and a verb used appropriately, so it is a full sentence.
some monitoring, such as video surveillance in many businesses, including banks and retails stores, is to be expected as necessary in order to provide security for the businesses.
1. Overall, 41 percent of respondents said their jobs offered opportunities for advancement and promotion.
He dressed accordingly for the night out. Accordingly is like appropriately.
The semiarid climate virtually eliminates all major apple pests.
When punctuation conventions are used appropriately, sentences flow fluently.