This is not one sentence, but two, because there are two separate ideas stated.
The team won the championship. They played hard.
The dogs habitually sleep in the morning, play in the afternoon, and eat inthe evening
revise.
Revise
Revise is a verb.
"review" means to look over. "Revise" means to change. --------- When students in North America prepare for examinations they 'review', in Britain they 'revise'.
i revise my writing piece before i publish a book.
yo ma ma ha to revise
It's good to review and revise your homework.
The editor liked my writing but told me I should revise the ending. The government had to revise their estimates concerning unemployment.
Our teacher told us to revise our culture poem for tomorrow's test.
The revised the completed syllabus before going into the exam. This is an example with revise inside it.
Make each fragment into a complete sentence.
you just did IDIOT
The dogs habitually sleep in the morning, play in the afternoon, and eat inthe evening
I was not quite as candid.
Revise the details to support the topic sentence
Edit is to check grammar. Revise is to go through and alter word choices, rewrite passages, and reorganize, large structural, content, and/or phrasing alterations.