To ensure parallelism, the sentence should be revised to: "She hoped that she would be able to paint, horseback ride, and travel." This structure maintains a consistent verb form and clearly lists her hopes in a parallel format.
The dogs habitually sleep in the morning, play in the afternoon, and eat inthe evening
This is not one sentence, but two, because there are two separate ideas stated.The team won the championship. They played hard.
It's good to review and revise your homework.
i revise my writing piece before i publish a book.
yo ma ma ha to revise
The editor liked my writing but told me I should revise the ending. The government had to revise their estimates concerning unemployment.
Our teacher told us to revise our culture poem for tomorrow's test.
Make each fragment into a complete sentence.
you just did IDIOT
One way to revise this sentence using a dash is: "She decided to expand her horizons – she signed up for a cooking class."
The revised the completed syllabus before going into the exam. This is an example with revise inside it.
To correct faulty parallelism, ensure that elements in a list or series maintain the same grammatical structure. For example, if you start with a verb in one part of the list, all items should also begin with a verb. Review the sentence to align phrases or clauses consistently, enhancing clarity and readability. Finally, revise the sentence to reflect this uniformity.