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Hulda Gleason ∙
It makes the scene feel as if it is happening in real time. ~APEX
Those sentences that are simple and direct speed up the pacing.
suspension of disbelief
"prickly dark"
To earn points from the Campfire Girls
A cough
Multiple variations for the same question.
Mine is:
Atmosphere and mood is correct for apex
Atmosphere and mood -apex :)
she runs to meet the bus and eats her apple
to get points from the Campfire girls
Her apple
She hears the sound of a woman cough inside the room
Jaja must choose between practicing her violin and going out with her friends