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Dianna Carter ∙
jin wang
Suzy Nakamura
It makes the scene feel as if it is happening in real time. ~APEX
Don't go out there please. I have a foreboding sensation.
Those sentences that are simple and direct speed up the pacing.
suspension of disbelief
"prickly dark"
interesting verbs
To earn points from the Campfire Girls
Atmosphere and mood is correct for apex
Atmosphere and mood -apex :)
to get points from the Campfire girls
She sees addie crying
which story is an example of a character arc
Addie starts to cry. (Apex)
Her apple
She hears the sound of a woman cough inside the room
The rules of reality that govern the story