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Dagmar Bergstrom ∙
jin wang
To Build a Fire was created in 1908.
The brutality of war
Don't go out there please. I have a foreboding sensation.
Those sentences that are simple and direct speed up the pacing.
suspension of disbelief
"prickly dark"
The curtains dragged heavily to the ground, the view from the glass obscured by a fog of neglect. (APEX)
To earn points from the Campfire Girls
Atmosphere and mood is correct for apex
Atmosphere and mood -apex :)
she runs to meet the bus and eats her apple
to get points from the Campfire girls
She sees addie crying
Addie starts to cry. (Apex)
Her apple
She hears the sound of a woman cough inside the room
The rules of reality that govern the story