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Reynold Kuphal ∙
The cast of Suspension of Disbelief - 2008 includes: Jesus Guevara as Jimmy
give an example of mixed dialogue
It makes the scene feel as if it is happening in real time. ~APEX
A robber's cave
Those sentences that are simple and direct speed up the pacing.
"prickly dark"
It slows down the pacing and forces the reader to pay more attention.
understatement
A cough
Atmosphere and mood -apex :)
to get points from the Campfire girls
Her apple
The breeze whipped playfully through the grass and caused the leaves to dance merrily in the air
The rules of reality that govern the story