This statement can be improved by clarifying what is meant by "putting other people faith in front of theirs" and how it relates to loyalty. Additionally, it would be essential to provide examples or context to support the assertion. A clear, concise thesis statement could be: "Loyalty is demonstrated through unwavering support and prioritizing the well-being and interests of others over personal gain or self-interest."
An effort by President Truman to find communists within the
American government because of the increasing communist fear,
Truman established the Loyalty Review Board to help find communism
within American politics.
Brand loyalty is when someone buys the same brand of product
repeatedly. People who have brand loyalty have characteristics that
include loyalty, trust, and commitment.
Beatrice shows loyalty to both Catherine and Eddie and Eddie
betrays his fartherly loyalty when he kisses Catherine and family
loyalty when he turns in relatives.
There is neither a Loyalty Island nor an east Loyalty Island in
Australia.
The Loyalty Islands are east to Australia. The Loyalty Islands
are Lifou, Mare and another one in the South Pacific - but they are
not a part of Australia.