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Natasha Sporer ∙
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It makes the scene feel as if it is happening in real time. ~APEX
Those sentences that are simple and direct speed up the pacing.
"prickly dark"
To earn points from the Campfire Girls
Atmosphere and mood is correct for apex
Atmosphere and mood -apex :)
she runs to meet the bus and eats her apple
to get points from the Campfire girls
She sees addie crying
The rules of reality that govern the story