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Angie Heaney ∙
Suzy Nakamura
Those sentences that are simple and direct speed up the pacing.
"prickly dark"
interesting verbs
To earn points from the Campfire Girls
A cough
Atmosphere and mood is correct for apex
Atmosphere and mood -apex :)
She sees addie crying
Addie starts to cry. (Apex)
Her apple
She hears the sound of a woman cough inside the room
The rules of reality that govern the story