No. It can be changed to:
I like my new apartment very much.
or
I very much like my apartment.
The correct way to write this sentence is "I really like my new apartment." "Very" is typically not used before "like" in English.
The sentence is grammatically correct.
Yes, that sentence is correct grammar.
The correct homophone is "too" cold to stay outside very long.
No, the sentence should be written as "The very same thing goes here." This version is grammatically correct.
My parents are very strict. For example, you can only watch one hour of TV each morning. Adding a period after "strict" and a comma after "For example" will correct the sentence.
That sentence is grammatically correct.
The sentence, 'Can you see if my sentence is correct?', is correct.
The correct sentence is: "I am very much looking forward to reading them."
Yes it's correct.
Yes, that is correct.
The couple was evicted from their apartment because they were always very late with the rent.
No, the sentence is incorrect. Correct: After the professor finished, the class was very confused.
The sentence is grammatically correct.
Yes, that sentence is correct grammar.
Short answer : Yes and not impolite at all, as suggested below. This is to be handled by you grammatically correct? requires inverted commas to be correct. It should be written as: "Is this sentence "This is to be handled by you." grammatically correct?" The sentence is correct but not very polite; it would be simpler to say "You are to handle this"
Only if punctuated: Thanks, God. If not directly addressing the Almighty, Thank God is the correct form.
Yes, very correct.