Editing and Revising

I'm only 11, but the way i remember things is like this: i look at the words, then keep on repeating them to myself! Like this i can remember stuff. Im sorry if this cant work for you, but it works for me!

An example of hubris is a character in a Greek tragedy who defies the gods' warnings and believes they are invincible. Another example is a leader who believes they are above the law and untouchable, leading to their downfall due to their arrogance.

In the mental status exam, which is part of any psychological evaluation, the sensorium refers to the person's grasp on time, place and person, all of which are functions of perception and memory. So, the sensorium is a person's immediate, short-, and long-term memory, especially to the extent to which this impacts whether or not they have a good handle on who they are and where they are located in place and time.

No, "central hub" can be a meaningful term that describes a central or main location where activities, information, or resources converge and are distributed. It emphasizes the importance of this specific hub in a larger network or system.

Both are correct, but "You should improve your investigative and evaluative skills" is the more common and formal expression. "Investigative and evaluative skills" implies a broader range of abilities in both conducting research and analyzing information. "Investigation and evaluation skills" are more focused on specific tasks related to these areas.

"There is a lot of sand" is correct.
There is alot of sand makes more sense.

Because it might be from a different country where they do that!

The correct grammar for this phrase is "was never affected." It is in the passive voice and indicates that something never experienced an impact or change.

To revise a sentence, review it for clarity, conciseness, grammar, and coherence. You can rephrase or reorder the words, check for spelling mistakes, ensure the subject and verb match, and confirm the sentence flows smoothly. It's also helpful to read the sentence aloud to hear how it sounds.

A declination is a term used in astronomy to describe the angular distance of a celestial object from the celestial equator. For example, the declination of the star Sirius is approximately -16.7 degrees, indicating its position relative to the celestial equator.

the best way to revise for a Spanish test is to use the LOOK,COVER ,WRITE ,CHECK method .You draw three columns the first column you put the English translation of the Spanish ,the second column you put the Spanish words and then you look at both the Spanish and English in the two columns and revise the words .then you cover the Spanish words and start translating the English into Spanish in the third column you check it and if you got some wrong you repeat the method till you get the words right

hope this helps!

(Note this only works with single word's if you want to remember a whole paragraph try another way)

Eating red meat is a serious problem, and the best way to solve it is to outlaw the meat-processing industry.

a conclusion should be based on the essay or writing topic you wrote, because if it is not based on the essay, it would be off topic. It should not repeat info previously stated, and it should not pose questions. THis is an example of a good conclusion based on a essay written about the book, the outsiders.

Reading this book provoked me, because I now realize discrimination and humiliation can have disastrous effects. I think that no one should go through the same pain as the greasers did, and that no one should be segregated because of class difference; after all, we all are human.

The purpose of indenting paragraphs is to indicate a change of subject (as when you move to a new "topic sentence") or at least to break up the text into more readable sections. No one wants to read an excessively long paragraph. It is easier to take in meaning when there are pauses provided by paragraphing.

Indenting is not the only way to show paragraph breaks. One can use the block paragraph style, in which there are no paragraph indents but a space is skipped between paragraphs.

The correct way to indent paragraphs, if that is your preferred style, is to use the tab. Strangely, many people don't know how to do this and indent by hitting the space bar a few times. This is a bad idea, because it often results in indents of uneven length and the resulting document doesn't look professional.

One common way to develop an essay is the "point, evidence, explanation" method. Start by making a point, then provide evidence to support that point, and finally, explain how the evidence supports your argument. This structured approach helps to create a logical flow in your essay.

During the prewriting step of the writing process, you should generate ideas and then organize them. This involves brainstorming to gather thoughts, making outlines to structure your content, and identifying key points to focus on in your writing. The goal of prewriting is to lay a solid foundation for the writing task ahead.

When previewing a text, you should gather an understanding of the main topic or thesis, key points or arguments presented, the author's perspective or bias, and how the information is structured (e.g., headings, subsections). This will help you determine the purpose of the text and decide if it is relevant to your needs.

Gender discrimination can negatively impact individuals by limiting their opportunities for education, employment, and advancement, leading to lower self-esteem and economic disparities. Positively, addressing and reducing gender discrimination can foster a more inclusive and diverse society, benefiting from the unique perspectives and contributions of all genders.

The "sc" in "scale" is considered a digraph because the two letters, "s" and "c," combine to represent one sound (/sk/). A blend consists of two or more consonants that each keep their individual sounds, such as "st" in "stop."

To Whom It May Concern

It is my pleasure to write on behalf of Mr. ____________________ S/O __________ who has worked with ____________ in capacity of Assistant Manager for six months.

During his work period Mr. __________ remained involved in his work dedicatedly. I found him pretty active in whatever task I have provided him. He is a confident person. He is professionally sound, hard-working and devoted worker. He has the motivation to take initiative and I am gratified that he had been helpful in advancement of our organization.

Moreover, I would like to reflect over his conduct during his stay with us. He has a genial temperament and can efficiently work in a team. All my staff is pleased with him and feels comfortable in teaming and coordinating with him for the realization of organizational goals and objectives.

I wish him all the best in all his future endeavours

Spiders scare many people; furthermore, they are often poisonous.

When a sentence is circled in editing, it typically indicates that there is something specific that needs attention or revision within that sentence. This could include issues such as clarity, grammar, punctuation, or content that requires further review by the writer or editor.

Please don't forget to cut the grass. Furthermore wash the cars.

Spits form as a result of deposition by longshore drift, which is the movement of sand along the coast by the waves. The spit is formed when any material that is being carried by the waves gets deposited due to a loss of the waves energy, this could be because of a change of wind direction, or an estuary in the opposing direction slowing it down. As time progresses the deposited material forms a spit.

Sediment for example at a mouth of a river is carried along the beach due to pravialling wind (when the wind blows the sea in a horizontal direction) the sediment is carried backwards and forwards called swash and backwash, over time the sediment can build up to form a landform such as a spit, along the edge of a bay. which usually have a hooked end.

Furthermore is used to add more information or evidence to support a point already made. It is typically used to introduce an additional idea that strengthens the argument or provides additional context. For example: "She excels in math; furthermore, she has a natural aptitude for problem-solving."