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Editing and Revising
This category is for questions about how one would go about taking an incomplete draft and bringing it to the final stages of a composed paper.
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How would you write a dialogue between base desire and spiritual aspiration?
I'm not going to write it for you, but here are some ideas. A base desire is something like selfishness, greed, gluttony, laziness (desire to sleep late instead of going to church or doing something helpful), or the desire to get high or have sex just for fun (without caring about the other person's pleasure or happiness or well-being). A spiritual aspiration is something like the wish to help other people or to relieve their suffering, the desire to meditate and discover the answers to life's deep mysteries (Who am I? Does God exist? What is the purpose of life?), the love of nature and the wish to protect the earth and its creatures, the aspiration to overcome personal weaknesses. Pretend that the two desires are going on a date or are two friends getting together, and they are trying to decide how to spend their time, and of course they argue. After each gives at least two arguments for his or her point of view, they can either come to a compromise, or one can win the argument, or they can split up, but the last option won't be a very happy one since these two characters actually represent two sides of the same person.
Writing dialogue is not as hard as you're letting it seem. You have dialogue all the time -- it's called talking. If you honestly cannot think of what your characters are going to say to one another, you need to go take a break and go somewhere out in public. Sit somewhere in the middle of a crowd for one to two hours and just listen to people talking. Then, go home and write down some of the things you heard people saying. That's dialogue.
When you need to have your characters talk, just pretend it's you and a friend (or several friends), and have them say something you'd probably say in the same situation. Then imagine what your friends would say in reply, and go back and forth that way. As you become a better writer, your characters themselves will "tell" you what they want to say, because they become like real people to you.
What are the examples of GIGO?
GIGO is short for garbage in garbage out, from the early days of computer science. Adopted by common culture, it is an advisement to consider the source of information for the best results.
What does that squiggly blue line in Microsoft Word mean?
The blue squiggly line means that there is something amiss with the formatting of the marked sentence, such as the font changing in the middle of the sentence. If you right-click on any part of what is so underlined, you will see a context menu that gives you options to fix or ignore the problem.
Other common squiggly line colors are red for potentially-misspelled words and green for stylistic problems (such as too many or too few spaces between words or at the ends of sentences.)
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Which type of article publish in Pharmacophore An International Research Journal?
You can publish original research paper, review article, technical report,short communication and any scientific research work in Pharmacophore An International Research Journal.
Menu Item is set of similar commands, actions, filters grouped together in list in Photoshop.
Give me an example of the freedom of speech?
The freedom of speech is when you have freedom to say I don't like this soup or that cat is ugly.pota
Domingo is an example of what?
dia (day of the week) Domingo means Sunday. * B*: Santo Domingo......sort of like a capital or city...
What is the best way to study and remember spanish?
An excellent way to learn a language is to make your own flash cards or buy a set of flash cards. Making your own is probably better since cards you buy from the store may not have all of the appropriate vocabulary and verbs available. The great thing about flash cards is that you can study alone or with the help of someone else.
If there is any vocabulary in the chapter or chapters that you are unfamiliar with, then familiarize yourself with all words. (i.e know how to spell all nouns and verbs)
Make sure you know all the conjugations of the verbs that you will see on the test. (Again, flash cards are very helpful.) You may also want to pick up the latest copy of 501 spanish Verbs (an extremely useful tool).
Be prepared to answer any oral questions that may be asked.
Read any and all written material and make sure that you know what your teacher expects.
CFC12-Another way to do it is to do this: * First make a flashcard{for example: learning "hola"(hello)} * Write "hola" on one side and "hello" on the other * First say the word out loud * Then listen to someone else saying "hello" * Next look at a picture doing the word{Someone saying "hello" or waving a greeting} * Lastly say "hola" again I hope this technique helps!
What is an example of a netforce?
More than one force can act on an object at once. For example, two people could push on a book at the same time. One person could push toward the left and the other could push toward the right. In this case the two forces would act against each other. If the force toward the left was greater than the force toward the right, then the prevailing force would be toward the left. The strength of this prevailing force would be the difference between the strengths of the two separate forces. In this prevailing force is called the net force. Basically, the word net means total. For example, if one person pushed the book with a force of 20 Newtons toward the left, and the other person pushed the book with a force of 18 Newtons toward the right, then that the net force would be 2 Newtons in size and directed toward the left. Here is a picture showing those forces:
When do you introduce a new paragraph?
The basic answer is ... whenever you want to.
The more techical answer is whenever the topic changes. Paragraphs are like little ideas - start a new paragraph when you start a new idea. Notice how I have started a new paragraph here because I changed ideas from "whenever you want to" to "whenever the topic changes."
A paragraph can be as many sentences as it needs to be - however, you usually do not want to make one sentence a paragraph unless it is a line of dialogue. Paragraphs are usually several sentences long because you need the sentences to explain your idea or to make your point.
Here are some examples of when you need a new paragraph:
- whenever someone speaks, they need their own paragraph
- whenever you change from one topic to another
- when the paragraph gets too long - big, bulky blocks of text are boring, so break them up into smaller paragraphs by finding little areas of ideas that can go together
- when time changes in the story or essay
- when place changes in the story or essay
- just to make it dramatic - sometimes a writer will place one or more sentences into their own paragraph just to make them stand out - look back at my first sentence and see how I did exactly that
These are a few standard purposes to make a new paragraph:
When you start in on a new topic
When you skip to a new time
When you skip to a new place
When a new person begins to speak
When you want to produce a dramatic effect
When you begin a new idea or point
To contrast information or ideas
When your readers need a pause
When you are ending your introduction
When you are starting your conclusion
Choose the best topic sentence for a paragraph about volunteers in New York City?
Many volunteer opportunities exists for New Yorkers who want to help their community.
Loams are gritty, plastic when moist, and retain water easily, yet they keep a lot of the water. They generally contain more nutrients than sandy soils. In addition to the term loam, different names are given to soils with slightly different proportions of sand, silt, and clay: sandy loam, silty loam, clay loam, sandy clay loam, silty clay loam.
A "loamy" soil feels mellow and is easy to work over a wide range of moisture conditions. A soil dominated by one or two of the three particle size groups can behave like loam if it has a strong granular structure (promoted by a high content of organic matter). However, a soil that meets the textural definition of loam can become unlike loamy earth if it is compacted, depleted of organic matter, or has dispersive clay in its fine-earth fraction.
Loam soil is ideal for growing crops because it retains nutrients well and retains water while still allowing the water to flow freely. This soil is found in a majority of the Midwest, and most successful farms in the area are types of loam soil.
Loam is also used for the construction of houses. Walls covered inside with a layer of loam work well to control air humidity. Loam, combined with straw, is also a widely-used construction material in poorer countries.
what about the EXAMPLES!This is absolutely rude and inconsiderate behavior. Take him aside, when the kids are not present, and tell him that this is unacceptable. It is not cute and it does not set a good example of what is courteous and respectful behavior when another person is present.
What is difference beween Research Proposal and Synopsis?
the basic difference between a research proposal and research synopsis is of nature. a synopsis is related to education while a proposal is to commercial research. the purpose of both terms is same and almost all the contents are also the same.
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Why do scientists need shorthand ways of writing elements and compounds?
Because to make the question or answer to be possible understand it fast
I think it is inductive..
Which topic sentence does not support a unified composition?
Music is a key element in cultures throughout history.
Could you show me Sample basic research proposal articles?
A standard research paper proposal should not in general be longer than ten per cent of the total length of your planned paper. For example, if the required word limit for your research paper cannot exceed ten thousand words, the proposal should be approximately one thousand words in total. A standard research paper proposal contains: * the topic, * the thesis, * the outline of planned research written in proper academic style, * the outline must demonstrate that you have researched preliminary sources in your topic and have analysed your paper Additionally, a research proposal has to present a list of annotated bibliography describing the main significance of each source for the paper and advisably a list of further sources which you intend to use in addition to the main literature.
copying large sections of text without proper citation
